What do you think of these Hip Hop Lyrics as a single?

How good would it do as a single

Chorus
Feels like I live inside a lie
Where can I hide
When the time it comes to find
Myself I need help
Broken promises never keep
Me sound asleep solemn low keys
Always living in THESE DREAMS

Verse One: 39 seconds.
1Lets arise to the high horizon/
2Defyin the laws of science/
3Doing everything they said was impossible/
4It cant be done/
5You kids end up all the same/
6Sweating from the heat of a gun/
7Always too afraid to take the extra lunge/
8Across the bridge don’t believe that your just a kid/
9Hate collides inside your mind cuz of your pessimistic bribe/
10That people lie and hide the truth of your skills from your eyes/
11And you always scream lies and why do I even try/
12To climb this hill maybe if I swallow all these pills/
13I wont have to deal with the pain I feel/
14With my insecurities of being so shrill/
15You don’t know who I wouldn’t kill to get one of these deals /
16For real life is a bitch but to music its like I’m a sour meal/

Chorus

Verse Two: 41 seconds.
17I remember when people said I couldn’t do it/
18That I would never pull through with it/
19But I do it not because of the sport/
20But because it supports my instabilities becoming so short/
21Crazy white boy this shits wack you must be on crack/
22Must be thinking your half black B-Rabbit/
23Better move his ass back across the track/
24Never could freestyle with Lamar and dread head/
25Getting tense and full of embarrassment/
26Never could use or even afford that Sudafed/
27And for every time I lost and tasted the cost/
28A fire grew in my heart bigger and bigger/
29Pushing around like a Zeppelin reunion mosh/
30Never realizing how lucky I was with the talent I had caught/
31The heat resonating getting too hot on the spot/
32I’ve always fought and like Kobe/
33I’ma risk it tonight and take the shot/

Chorus

Bridge: Sample Just a dream part in the 2nd airplanes song with eminem

Verse Three:46 seconds.
33Now I’m coming to the crossroads of a man and a teen/
34Wearing skinny jeans being obscene and living in a dream/
35I’ve always been dirty but I’m hoping that I’ll come out clean/
36Shit the things I’ve done for a dream/
37Wishin’ for the cream falling off the high beams/
38And when I started to scream my raps in to a mic/
39It seems that I started to redeem a dream/
40Thought to be lost and outta the way/
41But Ill never decay and I’ll never stray/
42 Putting childish things away its time for me to see again/
43And I’ll never get lost in the desert sea again/
44Time for Rob-3 and The Ugly Truth to be we again/
45United until death against a common foe/
46Betroved time to strike a major blow on these hoes/
(Yell these last lines)
47So fuck anyone who says anything different/
48I see you tip and toppling hobbling now /
49So live the dream and don’t let anyone take that away from you ever (ESJ Scream this word)ESPECIALLY NOW/

Chorus 2x

the chorus’s are sung in a tenor voice by the way

Chosen Answer:

mmmm…..its ok but i think it needs some work dude!!!!
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on: 6th February 11

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One Response to “What do you think of these Hip Hop Lyrics as a single?”

  1. Miki Mix says:

    mmmm…..its ok but i think it needs some work dude!!!!

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